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"Unbreakable" by LB

LB writes the following about her poem titled "Undreakable"
 
"I actually write songs mostly and it's really cathartic for me to get things out when I'm going through something. When I read them over sometimes they sound so sad or mad or defeated that I want to give myself a hug. but it's just what I'm feeling at that moment and I let myself feel it so that I can try to let it go, or figure it out or at least get it off my chest. Even when I know it doesn't make sense or if I don't really feel that way entirely, sometimes I just need to let myself be emotional and even irrational. I'm kind of hot and cold in the sense that sometimes I'm numb and other times I feel too much.
It's a sad poem, but if it helps someone to relate and feel less alone in their feelings or experience that would be awesome."
 
Unbreakable 
 
If only I could find a way
To bear the cruel things that you say 
 
Your words would be the one to break
Each cutting sound your quick tongue makes 
 
Those scattered pieces that you’d see
Would be your broken words, not me 
 
If I could find the words to speak
Or find a way to be less weak 
 
If I could try to love myself
Enough to not need anyone else
 
Maybe I wouldn’t be such a fool
To think that you could love me too 
 
To think that you might try to find
Some way to not be so unkind 
 
If I could see myself for me
Instead of what you seem to see 
 
Until I find a love that’s capable
Dear God, just please make me unbreakable
 
by LB
 
Thank you LB for inspiring us all with your words, and reminding us that we are are so much more alike than we think :)

13 Comments to "Unbreakable" by LB:

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Mellissa on Friday, April 22, 2011 2:25 AM
Beautiful poem, thank you for sharing & Natalie 4 posting, I enjoyed it very much, shared on FB ~Shine on LB♥
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LB on Sunday, April 24, 2011 3:13 PM
Thank you so much Melissa!


LB on Sunday, April 24, 2011 3:13 PM
Thank you so much Melissa!


LB on Sunday, April 24, 2011 3:14 PM
Thank you so much Melissa!


Mellissa on Friday, April 22, 2011 2:25 AM
Beautiful poem, thank you for sharing & Natalie 4 posting, I enjoyed it very much, shared on FB ~Shine on LB♥
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Mellissa on Friday, April 22, 2011 2:25 AM
Beautiful poem, thank you for sharing & Natalie 4 posting, I enjoyed it very much, shared on FB ~Shine on LB♥
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C.T. on Wednesday, April 27, 2011 9:05 PM
Beautiful! Thank you so much for sharing! LOVE this line: "Until I find a love that’s capable Dear God, just please make me unbreakable"
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LB on Wednesday, April 27, 2011 10:40 PM
Thank you so much C.T.! I am glad you enjoyed it and I appreciate your support! I also think it was extra cool to see myself quoted! :-)


LB on Wednesday, April 27, 2011 10:51 PM
Thank you so much C.T.! I am glad you enjoyed it and I appreciate your support! I also think it was extra cool to see myself quoted! :-)


Leslie on Friday, June 03, 2011 8:25 PM
LB: You're the bomb. "Find a way to be less weak." I use those words so often, it's tragic. But I think you found the key - to see me for me, "instead of what you seem to see." LOVE IT! Love you :) LB
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LB on Wednesday, July 06, 2011 8:58 PM
Thanks LB!!! Love you too!


bet on Thursday, June 09, 2011 8:55 PM
You are very sensitive human being. You care so much. The world needs more people like you
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LB on Wednesday, July 06, 2011 9:02 PM
bet, thank you so much for your kind words. It truly meant so much to me. Thank you - LB :-)

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